Brad
SYNOPSIS:
As far as Voodoo curses go, swapping bodies with someone else for 24 hours isn't so bad. 18 year old Scott doesn't have much say in the matter when he wakes up in an unknown bed, occupying an unknown body. His neighbor - Max - arrives to explain, terrifying the young man, suggesting they simply stay at home and keep their heads down for the day until they swap back. Of course, for a horny 18 year old with a new body to test-drive, and an invitation to a very horny party, staying at home isn't an option. Will Max comply with his own rules, or will he be unable to resist enjoying the new body he's been gifted?
Chapter read time: 18 minutes.
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This was the most boring shit I’ve ever read from Brad. Nothing happened. It hasn’t advanced the plot or given further exposition than any of the other’s from the Max-as-Scott-narrative. There wasn’t even a mention of dick, or anything remotely horny… and I waited a week for it. AND PAID MONEY FOR THE WEEKLONG WAIT! Disappointed. For the first time ever, Brad has let me down…
You know what?
You’re absolutely right.
I’m sorry the update didn’t meet expectation and when I read it back I knew it was insufficient. I think this happened because I wanted to expand the characters beyond simple jack off action, I was worried about it becoming repetitive. I mentioned in another post that I was kind of annoyed that I’d confined myself to 24 hours in this story, when there could have been opportunities to expand it out over several days and lead to a much bigger adventure. I guess I got a little too “in my feelings” about that and tried to write something that would act as a bridge before the finale.
So I decided to rewrite the entire addition. I now have a much better plan for how the last two instalments of this story will go.
But hey, at least it encouraged a comment! 🙂
You should be able to enjoy the new chapter but if it’s still showing the bad one refresh your browser, maybe log out and in again, perhaps clear cache.
I hope you enjoy this new addition more than the weak one you had to endure.
Let me know what you think!
Brad.
Aw, shit! Brad, man, buddy, I certainly didn’t intend for you to rewrite the whole goddamned thing! Or rewrite anything!
I’m a fan! I was a Patreon subscriber from the beginning to the end! I have all four Book(s) of Bate(s) [in fact I have two or three copies of the first three because, after some time, I couldn’t ever find my original download link from the first- or second- purchase!], I have Bateman’s Gully! I’m a true fan! A BIG, BIG fan even! I- at least like to think- am familiar with how you write! And you tell fantastic stories that are rich in great substance and pack a nice heft in length, with multiple payoffs along the way! With the upmost respect, genuinely and sincerely, infinite due respect: I don’t pull out a Brad Smithson story for mundane intricacies of deeply expansive character background that walks me through the day-to-day of their life; I want a nice, long, perverted, horny bator story that matches my mood and let’s me get lost in some fucking hot- and sometimes even naughty and/or taboo- fantasy. And at the very least, I WANT IT MAKE MY DRIP PRECUM LIKE A LEAKING SPIGOT… if not full on make me nut!
My original comment, perhaps, was a bit too scathing… I mean I did spend ~13 minutes reading it. In its entirety; I never stopped or clicked away. I mean I read it all the way to the comment section, and felt compelled to leave one. Maybe it’s because the Scott-as-Max narrative moved with such horny gusto, and then ended on a cliffhanger that set my expectations for Max-as-Scott’s narrative to follow the same path, and get back to that cliffhanger(?)!
Or, maybe I was just in a certain kind of mood that brought out the asshole in me…
But, yes… I did enjoy this, very much!
Cheers, Bruv!!
R L M